Do You See?
>Here was the Day 26 prompt: “For today’s prompt, I want you to write a poem involving miscommunication. It can be miscommunication between two people or misinterpretation of some sort. I will leave it up to you guys to deal with it however you want.” Read more at: April PAD Challenge: Day 26
The soldiers shook hands, they held out theirs
Still the hummers and tanks packed goodwill home
The Private drank his sweet tea, his kids took candy
Yet a rifle got the swarthy man’s brother fleeing the night
Our boys never swore, the locals knew English after all
The cry for war and blood got ’em, clotted their tongues
The fatigued pocket had the culture ‘smart card’ tucked in
The chest was shattered, from some unsaid lines unknown.
NOTE: The Marine Corps has been equipping troops with a sort of abbreviated Emily Post-style guide to etiquette in Iraq. The laminated “Iraq Culture Smart Card” consists of 16 panels and can fold down into something you can slip into your breast pocket. “It seems late in the day for such niceties,” observed Steven Aftergood in Secrecy News, a Web log maintained by the Federation of American Scientists, which posted the Smart Card online. http://www.scribd.com/doc/3762214/US-Military-Iraq-Culture-Smart-Card